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Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Daniel, the man unable to choose whether the hospital window should remain open gives role loss a scale that titles and statistics often miss. Your practice of making three small, unconsulted decisions respects how agency may need to return through ordinary acts before a person is ready to design an entire next chapter. “You need a sandwich you chose yourself” carries the piece’s most humane permission: begin where choice feels possible and let lived evidence rebuild trust in judgment. Grateful for the candor with which you turned your own season of diminished certainty into a practical doorway for men who may mistake disorientation for permanent incapacity.

Daniel P. Hirschi's avatar

Thank you, Kevin. You caught the part I wasn't sure would survive the edit... :-)

The sandwich line felt too small when I wrote it. Almost silly next to the weight of the subject.

But that's how it actually goes. A man who has lost his rank cannot be handed a five-year plan. He can be handed a menu.

The window in that hospital room taught me more about agency than anything I read afterward. I couldn't reach it. Somebody else decided.

And I noticed how fast I stopped having opinions about it.

Grateful you read it that closely.